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Q: Is it more fun to exercise alone or with other people?
A: I think it would be more fun to exercise with others, but I think it wouldn't be efficient.
Because even if they exercise for the same time, if they exercise with others, they might talk with others more, and exercising time will decrease.
But if they exercise alone, they can only concentrate on exercising, so it would be more efficient.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I think it would be more fun to exercise with others, but I think it wouldn't be efficient.
>>CORRECT!

2. Because even if they exercise for the same time, if they exercise with others, they might talk with others more, and exercising time will decrease.
>>Even if they exercise at the same time, if they exercise with others, there might be more talking, and the exercising time will decrease.

3. But if they exercise alone, they can only concentrate on exercising, so it would be more efficient.
>>CORRECT!

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