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April 17th\'s homework

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The subway is so bustling during rush hour that i drive to work.
I should have used my time productively after my college, but i regret not being able to.
Busy schedule tends to keep people out of depression.

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Hi Yeon Hee, 

Thanks for doing the homework. You did really great here. ^^

-Teacher Ash

The subway is so bustling during rush hour that i drive to work.
>> I had to drive to work because of the bustling subway during rush hour. 

I should have used my time productively after my college, but i regret not being able to.
>> I should have used my time productively after college. I regret not being able to.

Busy schedule tends to keep people out of depression.
>> CORRECT
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