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I believe that it is impossible to expect and prepare all kind of risks.
For example, although I drew a perfect report after reviewing a few times, the evaluation sometimes depends on the condition of leader.
I realized that the important thing is not preparing but responding while I've experienced diverse cases.
When the unexpected events are happened, finding an alternative as soon as possbile is really crucial for us.
This attitude helps us to live a relaxed life since we can believe ourselves to solve whatever it happens.

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Hi there, Ms. Yu Jin! Thank you for sharing your insights on dealing with risks and unexpected events. Your perspective on emphasizing response over preparation is thought-provoking and shows a mature understanding of adaptability in real-world scenarios. It's impressive to see how you recognize the importance of flexibility and quick thinking. Keep nurturing this resilient attitude—it will undoubtedly serve you well in various aspects of life.
~T. Jenna

I believe that it is impossible to expect and prepare all kind of risks.
>>
I believe that it is impossible to expect and prepare for all kinds of risks.
For example, although I drew a perfect report after reviewing a few times, the evaluation sometimes depends on the condition of leader.
>>For example, although I produced/created a perfect report after reviewing it several times, the evaluation sometimes depends on the condition of the leader
I realized that the important thing is not preparing but responding while I've experienced diverse cases.
>>I realized that the important thing is not preparation, but response when I face diverse cases.
When the unexpected events are happened, finding an alternative as soon as possbile is really crucial for us.
>>When unexpected events happen, finding an alternative as soon as possible is really crucial for us.
This attitude helps us to live a relaxed life since we can believe ourselves to solve whatever it happens.
>>This attitude helps us live a relaxed life since it allows us to believe in ourselves to solve whatever happens.
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