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Thank you for wishing me luck.
Actually, I thought we were going to talk about the interview today.
Since the interview is such a nervous atmosphere, I don't think I can help being nervous.
I'm worried that I won't be able to answer well, but I want to do well.
Everyone told me not to let my nervousness ruin me.
I'm going to try to be a little crazy. HAHA.
You know, I want to improve my nervousness at this moment.
When it's such an important moment, I'm so nervous. And I can imagine so much.
For example, in this situation, what if I make a mistake in front of the interviewer? what if I write the material incorrectly? what if I answer incorrectly? I think I'm not good enough than others. What should I do? Things like this.
As I keep imagining it like this, I think it's a negative idea and the tension is doubled.
Even if I try not to, it doesn't work.
Then, the expression solidifies and the tension is expressed with the body, which is a problem.
I'll be able to have a good interview?

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Hello, Yun!
Making mistakes is natural. If that happens, try to listen to corrections and demonstrate a genuine desire to learn and improve. It is good to improve our skills, but we should not focus solely on them because character and personality are also important. They also want to see how you will manage situations that are beyond your knowledge. It is essential to show them that, even if you are not sure about the given issue, you are prepared to learn and do what is necessary. When you are nervous, the interviewer senses it, so keep smiling and focus on what you need to do. Believe you can, because you do:) I believe in you 
Chammy

Thank you for wishing me luck.
Actually, I thought we were going to talk about the interview today.
Since the interview is such a nervous atmosphere, I don't think I can help being nervous.
I'm worried that I won't be able to answer well, but I want to do well.
Everyone told me not to let my nervousness ruin me.
I'm going to try to be a little crazy. HAHA.
You know, I want to improve my nervousness at this moment.
When it's such an important moment, I'm so nervous. And I can imagine so much.
For example, in this situation, what if I make a mistake in front of the interviewer? what if I write the material incorrectly? what if I answer incorrectly? I think I'm not good enough than others. What should I do? Things like this.
As I keep imagining it like this, it's a negative idea and the tension is doubled.
Even if I try not to, it doesn't work.
Then, the expression solidifies and the tension is expressed with the body, which is a problem.
>>Correct
I'll be able to have a good interview?
>>Will I be able to have a good interview?

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