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What do you dislike more, a loud neighbor or a nosy neighbor?

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I dislike a loud neighbor more.
I am sensitive to noise and more vulnerable to noisy situation.
I think I can handle with a nosy neighbor.

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Good evening, Rachel!

Having a noisy and loud neighbor has been a source of many unbelievable crimes in the past. There is something about an unnecessary noise that we cannot take at a certain level. So, beware to your loud neighbor. ^^

Anyway, below, my comment is more on the pluralization on the second sentences with 'situation' as well as the omission of 'with' on your last sentences. Study them carefully.

Thank you for your diligence and hard work.

See you!

-T. Donna~

I dislike a loud neighbor more.
>> Correct!

I am sensitive to noise and more vulnerable to noisy situation.
>> I am sensitive to noise and more vulnerable to noisy situations.

I think I can handle with a nosy neighbor.
>> I think I can handle a nosy neighbor.
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