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HOMEWORK: Why do people need to learn English as a second language?

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I DON'T know? i thought of english as a second languge, but i had neverheard this question.

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english as a second language because that is used the many people.

i need to be good at english, it is easy to communicate with various people.

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Hello, Eve!
English is important because it is the universal language. Just like what you have mentioned, it is the language you can use in able to connect with other people of different nationality^^ 
Chammy
I DON'T know? i thought of english as a second languge, but i had neverheard this question.
>> I am not sure. I thought of English as a second language but I had never heard this question.
then i think this questiong
>> I think about this question.
english as a second language because that is used the many people.
>> We need to learn English as a second language because it is used by many people. 
i need to be good at english, it is easy to communicate with various people.
>> I need to be good at English so it will be easy to communicate with various people. 
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