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In my country it called Hangul day, when that day, Too many shops, and sns you can show Korean words, if they words not Korean, it doesn't matter, just translated to Korean, when the CHOSUN dynasty, made it korean words.(1443) so CHOSUN dynasty before, we used to chines not speak, just wright word. so you can find korean and chines very similar means, but just similar, not a same.
some chinese historians said that korean is not make themselves, just copied Chinese. it was incorrect.
anyway, Not most people, just only me, when hangul day, i try not to speak English as much as possible. but you know, it's impossible.
in korea, already many parts use english.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Dan!
During our class earlier, I admired your patriotism towards Hangul. Reading your homework helped me understand you better.
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~

In my country it called Hangul day, when that day, Too many shops, and sns you can show Korean words, if they words not Korean, it doesn't matter, just translated to Korean, when the CHOSUN dynasty, made it korean words.
>>>  In my country, the day celebrating the Korean alphabet is called Hangul Day. On this day, many shops and social media platforms display Korean words. Even if the words are not originally in Korean, they are translated to Korean as a way to honor the creation of the Korean alphabet by the Chosun dynasty.

(1443) so CHOSUN dynasty before, we used to chines not speak, just wright word. so you can find korean and chines very similar means, but just similar, not a same.
>>> (1443) During the Chosun dynasty, Koreans used to write Chinese characters instead of speaking the language. This is why some Korean and Chinese words may appear similar, but they are not the same.


some chinese historians said that korean is not make themselves, just copied Chinese.
>>> Some Chinese historians have claimed that Koreans did not create their own culture but rather copied it from the Chinese.

it was incorrect.
>>> It was a wrong information.

anyway, Not most people, just only me, when hangul day, i try not to speak English as much as possible. but you know, it's impossible.
>>> On Hangul Day, I try to avoid using English as much as possible, but it's nearly impossible

in korea, already many parts use english.
>>> Here in Korea, English has been used in many areas.
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