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작성자: 윤*선
2024-04-08 2194

회원님의 영작문

Yes. Of course, I am well aware of my personality. And my personality changes as I get older and changes over time. I have rare memories of my environment or friends since I was 6 years old. When I was very young, I loved playing outside with my friends. My personality was bright and I had a lot of friends. As I became a senior, I hung out with a small number of close friends rather than meeting many friends. I didn't talk much, and I liked listening to my friends more. From my 20s to early 40s, I lived a hectic life while taking care of my children. Now that I am 50 years old, my life is stabilized, and I feel good to have some time to do sports or learn. I love myself now.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I believe you have been through a lot and now, you truly deserve some time to take care of yourself. Thank you for sharing, Mia! Well done!
-Khai
Yes. 

>> CORRECT

Of course, I am well aware of my personality. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> I am very much aware of my personality.

And my personality changes as I get older and changes over time. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> And my personality changes as I age.

I have rare memories of my environment or friends since I was 6 years old. 

>> CORRECT

When I was very young, I loved playing outside with my friends. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> I loved playing outside with my friends when I was very young.

My personality was bright and I had a lot of friends. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> I had a lively character and interacted with many friends.

As I became a senior, I hung out with a small number of close friends rather than meeting many friends. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> As I become older, I prefer hanging out with a few people.

I didn't talk much, and I liked listening to my friends more. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> I prefer listening to my friends than talking.

From my 20s to early 40s, I lived a hectic life while taking care of my children. 

>> CORRECT 

OR

>> When I was in my early 20s to 40s, I had a busy life as I was taking care of my children.

Now that I am 50 years old, my life is stabilized, and I feel good to have some time to do sports or learn. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Currently I am 50 years old and stable. I feel good to have some time to do sports or learn.

I love myself now.
>> CORRECT
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