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If you have the chance to be a celebrity or influencer, which one do you want to be?

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If I have a chance, I want to be an influencer.
I'm an Initiative person, so that I prefer make a decision by myself and provide my opinion to others, not just follow the company's plan.
Also influencer is specialized in the field and give honest review to customer, and I think it will suitable for me.

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Hi there, Rachel!

Being an influencer establishes a strong foundation of followers with the same field of interest and inclination. Of course, they also enjoy the celebrity status only at a more concentrated level.

Influencers are surely looked up to by their  viewers by the content they make. In that way, inspiring them is direct and almost effortless.

Take a look at the proper capitalization as well as the use of 'a, an, and the' in your sentences are they can be tricky at times. Overall, great job!

See you later.

-T. Donna~

If I have a chance, I want to be an influencer.
>> Correct!

I'm an Initiative person, so that I prefer make a decision by myself and provide my opinion to others, not just follow the company's plan.
>>  I'm an initiative person, so I prefer to make a decision by myself and provide my opinion to others, not just follow the company's plan.

Also influencer is specialized in the field and give honest review to customer, and I think it will suitable for me.
>> Also an influencer is specialized in the field and give honest review to customer, and I think it will be suitable for me.
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