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How does sportswear affect performance?

작성자: 박*호
2024-04-08 1380

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In the past, not only ordinary people but also athletes exercised in casual clothes regardless of the sport they play.
people didn't think that sportswear had much to do with athletic performance.
However, recently, as sports science has developed, sportswear has become more and more advanced.
Sports is a science.
Sportswear influences athletic performance.
When exercising, athleticㄴ have to run faster and farther than their opponents, so sportswear should have excellent elasticity, minimize air friction, be lightweight, absorb sweat, and be well ventilated.
These days, swimmers, regardless of gender, wear full-body swimsuits.
It is said that swimsuits were made from a material similar to fish scales to minimize friction with water.
Runners and soccer players also wear sportswear that minimizes friction with the air.
Cyclists wear sportswear with padding to protect their hips.
Recently, non-athletes also tend to wear clothes developed to improve performance in each sport.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Nice work, Sun! 

Proper clothing aids in wicking away sweat, reducing lactic acid build-up, and providing compression for increased blood flow. Sports clothing is usually made from materials like sweat-wicking fabric, which helps keep athletes cool and dry. Different types of materials are used to make sports clothes. 

- Kristine ^^ 

In the past, not only ordinary people but also athletes exercised in casual clothes regardless of the sport they play.
>> In the past, regardless of the sport they played, athletes as well as regular people worked out in casual attire.
people didn't think that sportswear had much to do with athletic performance.
>> People didn't think that athletic performance and clothing were closely related.
However, recently, as sports science has developed, sportswear has become more and more advanced.
>> However as sports science has evolved, clothing has also become increasingly sophisticated in recent years.
Sports is a science.
>> Science plays a part in sports.
Sportswear influences athletic performance.
>> Sportswear affects how well athletes perform.
When exercising, athleticㄴ have to run faster and farther than their opponents, so sportswear should have excellent elasticity, minimize air friction, be lightweight, absorb sweat, and be well ventilated.
>> Athletic people must run farther and faster than their opponents during exercise, thus their clothing needs to be lightweight, absorb perspiration, have good flexibility, and have good ventilation.
These days, swimmers, regardless of gender, wear full-body swimsuits.
>> All swimmers these days are dressed in full-body swimsuits.
It is said that swimsuits were made from a material similar to fish scales to minimize friction with water.
>> It is stated that in order to reduce friction with water, swimsuits were originally fashioned of a substance resembling fish scales.
Runners and soccer players also wear sportswear that minimizes friction with the air.
>> Soccer players and runners both wear apparel designed to reduce air friction.
Cyclists wear sportswear with padding to protect their hips.
>> Correct.
Recently, non-athletes also tend to wear clothes developed to improve performance in each sport.
>> Correct.
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