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Personally, I really like the space called a cafe. If I were to run my own business, I would like to run a bakery cafe that sells bread and coffee. I want to make the inside of the coffee shop a space with warm tone lighting with ivory and brown. Nowadays, a lot of unmanned cafes have also been created. An unmanned cafe costs less labor and costs, and it is convenient to pay right in without standing in line. I think it is okay to have an unmanned cafe because of this convenience.

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Coffee shops are popular. For me, they don¡¯t go out of style. People continuously patronize these because people treat coffee and tea as essential things in their daily lives. 
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Personally, I really like the space called a cafe.

>> I like the space called a cafe.

If I were to run my own business, I would like to run a bakery cafe that sells bread and coffee.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> If I am given a chance to have my own business, I would like to run a bakery cafe that sells bread and coffee. 

I want to make the inside of the coffee shop a space with warm tone lighting with ivory and brown.

>> I want to make the coffee shop a space with a warm tone lighting with ivory and brown. 

Nowadays, a lot of unmanned cafes have also been created.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Nowadays, there are lots of established unmanned cafes. 

An unmanned cafe costs less labor and costs, and it is convenient to pay right in without standing in line.

>> An unmanned cafe¡¯s operating costs are way less because there will be no labor costs. It is also convenient to pay without standing in line.

I think it is okay to have an unmanned cafe because of this convenience.
>> CORRECT
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