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I think respect and manners are actions that animals do, too.

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Respect is deeply related to human dignity.
We distinguish between humans and animals because we have a higher level of knowledge than animals.
I think we should refrain from thinking like animals as much as we distinguish.
When we respect each other, society will become more solid and will not collapse easily.
The weight of the word respect is really hard to gauge, but I believe it's at least the definition of action we can all do.
More than anything, it makes me feel more comfortable to be able to respect each other's values and feelings than to hate the other person.

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Hello Da Hye,

I wanted to take a moment to applaud your exceptional work on your homework. Your understanding of the concept of respect and its connection to human dignity is truly commendable. You articulated your thoughts with clarity and insight, demonstrating a deep understanding of the topic. Your analysis of why we distinguish between humans and animals, as well as your suggestion to refrain from thinking like animals, shows a mature perspective and critical thinking skills. Moreover, your emphasis on the importance of mutual respect in society highlights your empathy and understanding of human relationships. I'm genuinely impressed by your thoughtful reflections and the way you express yourself. Keep up the fantastic work! Your dedication to learning and your ability to convey your ideas effectively are truly inspiring. Looking forward to our next lesson!

~Teacher Cathy


Respect is deeply related to human dignity.

>>CORRECT

OR>> Respect is closely tied to how we see ourselves as humans.

We distinguish between humans and animals because we have a higher level of knowledge than animals.

>>CORRECT

OR>> We tell the difference between people and animals because we know more than animals do.

I think we should refrain from thinking like animals as much as we distinguish.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I think we shouldn't act like animals as much as we act differently from them.

When we respect each other, society will become more solid and will not collapse easily.

>>CORRECT

OR>> When we treat each other well, our community gets stronger and isn't likely to fall apart easily.

The weight of the word respect is really hard to gauge, but I believe it's at least the definition of action we can all do.

>>CORRECT

OR>> Figuring out how important "respect" is can be really tough, but I think it's something we can all do.

More than anything, it makes me feel more comfortable to be able to respect each other's values and feelings than to hate the other person.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Most of all, it feels good to respect each other's feelings and beliefs instead of hating someone.

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