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When I was young, I didn't have enough home environment. I ate any food well because I often got hungry because I lived in an environment where there was not enough food. On the other hand, children these days are growing up in an environment where there is a lot of food. I think the reason why children don't eat the food prepared by their mothers is that they have other things to eat even if they don't, or because their children don't eat, they compensate with other snacks.

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I certainly agree with your answer, Mia. I hope children nowadays will value the good environment that they have.
-Khai

When I was young, I didn't have enough home environment.

>> When I was young, I didn't have enough of a home environment.

I ate any food well because I often got hungry because I lived in an environment where there was not enough food.

>> When I was young, I ate all kinds of food well. I often got hungry because I lived in an environment where there was not enough food.

On the other hand, children these days are growing up in an environment where there is a lot of food.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> These days, children are being raised in an environment with many food resources.

I think the reason why children don't eat the food prepared by their mothers is that they have other things to eat even if they don't, or because their children don't eat, they compensate with other snacks.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> I think the reason why children don't eat the food prepared by their parents is that they have other choices to eat. Also, if a child does not want to eat what was prepared, parents will compensate it with other snacks.


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