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What qualities does a good basketball player need?

작성자: 박*호
2024-04-03 469

회원님의 영작문

Basketball is an intense sport because it requires running around constantly on a narrow court, and it is very easy for players to get injured.
Therefore, it is most important to have strong stamina to last 40 minutes in the game.
Therefore, players invest the most time in basic physical training before learning basketball skills.
Next, players must practice various skills as they must pass to their teammates and attempt shots while avoiding interference from opposing players.
Good players succeed in passing or scoring by using moves or techniques to deceive their opponents.
And basketball is a team sport, not an individual sport.
Since five players must work together as a team to face the opposing team, cooperation with each other is most important.
Sometimes, one outstanding player plays independently instead of cooperating with team players, ruining teamwork and losing the game.
Therefore, team coaches also make efforts to improve teamwork.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Goodmorning, Sun! 

Dribbling the ball is one of the fundamentals of playing basketball. Any good player knows they need to keep the ball moving if they want to keep moving. Most children start by keeping the ball in motion while they stand still. This helps develop another important physical literacy skill: hand-eye coordination.

- Kristine ^^ 

Basketball is an intense sport because it requires running around constantly on a narrow court, and it is very easy for players to get injured.
>> Correct.
Therefore, it is most important to have strong stamina to last 40 minutes in the game.
>> It is crucial to have good stamina in order to play for 40 minutes.
Therefore, players invest the most time in basic physical training before learning basketball skills.
>> Therefore, before learning basketball, athletes devote most of their time to fundamental physical conditioning.
Next, players must practice various skills as they must pass to their teammates and attempt shots while avoiding interference from opposing players.
>> The next task for the players is to hone an array of skills as they attempt shots and pass to their teammates while blocking their opponents.
Good players succeed in passing or scoring by using moves or techniques to deceive their opponents.
>>> Correct.
And basketball is a team sport, not an individual sport.
>> Correct.
Since five players must work together as a team to face the opposing team, cooperation with each other is most important.
>> Correct.
Sometimes, one outstanding player plays independently instead of cooperating with team players, ruining teamwork and losing the game.
>> Occasionally, an outstanding player opts to play alone rather than cooperating with others, which undermines teamwork and losing in the game.
Therefore, team coaches also make efforts to improve teamwork.
>> Correct.
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