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Expect
The job performance depends on how much team members expect me to contribute to tasks.

Fulfilling
The fulfilling emotion in workplace is the key factor of sustaining the present job.

Resource
Team leaders should observe each team's internal resources and manage manpower securing enough relaxation.

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HI, Ms. Yu Jin! Your sentences demonstrate clarity and conciseness in conveying workplace concepts, which is commendable. They are easily understandable and effectively communicate your ideas. However, there's an opportunity for improvement in terms of specificity and precision, especially in the use of terminology. 
~T. Jenna

Expect
The job performance depends on how much team members expect me to contribute to tasks.
>>My job performance depends on how much my team members expect me to contribute to our taks.
OR
>>My job performance hinges on the extent to which my team members expect me to contribute to our tasks.
Fulfilling
The fulfilling emotion in workplace is the key factor of sustaining the present job.
>>The fulfilling emotions in the workplace are key factors in sustaining one's current job.
Resource
Team leaders should observe each team's internal resources and manage manpower securing enough relaxation.
>>Team leaders should observe each team's internal resources and manage manpower to ensure enough/sufficient relaxation.
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