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Which skills do you think you need to be an excellent table tennis player?

작성자: 박*호
2024-04-02 315

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I think table tennis is a sport where agility is more important than any other sport.
Compared to other sports, table tennis is played on a very narrow table and requires agile movements because players have to hit a small, light and fast table tennis ball over the net and drop it into the opponent's court.
Also, compared to other sports, service is very important.
If players create a strong spin on the ball when serving, it will be very difficult for the opponents to receive it.
So, when I was young, I did a lot of practice and service practice to improve my agility in order to become good at table tennis.
Because table tennis requires agile movements, Asian countries, which are relatively smaller than Europeans, are good at table tennis.
In particular, China and Korea are the strongest countries in table tennis.
On the other hand, Asians do not stand out significantly in tennis, which requires great power and stamina.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Sun! 

Being able to play table tennis well is a great art. Ease and quickness of movements, swiftness of attacks and dedication of defense, unexpectedness and wit of technical combinations, performed with great dexterity in a split second, are an exciting sports spectacle.

- Kristine ^^ 

I think table tennis is a sport where agility is more important than any other sport.
>> In my opinion, agility is even more crucial in table tennis than any other sports. 
Compared to other sports, table tennis is played on a very narrow table and requires agile movements because players have to hit a small, light and fast table tennis ball over the net and drop it into the opponent's court.
>> Table tennis players must hit a small, light, and fast table tennis ball over the net and drop it into their opponent's court, which makes the game played on a much narrower table than other sports.
Also, compared to other sports, service is very important.
>> In addition, service is far more important than in other sports.
If players create a strong spin on the ball when serving, it will be very difficult for the opponents to receive it.
>> It will be quite tough for the opponent to receive the ball if they serve it with strong spin.
So, when I was young, I did a lot of practice and service practice to improve my agility in order to become good at table tennis.
>> In order to increase my agility and become proficient in table tennis, I practiced a lot when I was younger.
Because table tennis requires agile movements, Asian countries, which are relatively smaller than Europeans, are good at table tennis.
>> Asian countries are much smaller than European ones, but they excel at table tennis because the game demands quick movements.
In particular, China and Korea are the strongest countries in table tennis.
>> China and Korea stand out as the top two nations in table tennis.
On the other hand, Asians do not stand out significantly in tennis, which requires great power and stamina
>> However, Asians are not particularly noticeable in tennis, which demands a lot of strength and endurance.
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