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I often hear that some celebrities and politicians donate an enormous supporting money to the weak.
Since this activities are not legal duty, we don't have the right to criticize them if they don't do that.
However, it can be classified a type of moral duty to make good circle in society.
Their behaviors can make a positive impact to public through media.
And also, their wealth is not only from the efforts but also sometimes from luck or inheritance.
Thus, they should make an action related to noblesse oblige

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Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Your insight into the role of celebrities and politicians in supporting the less fortunate is commendable. While not legally obligated, many argue for a moral duty to give back, especially considering their influence and the origins of their wealth. Encouraging a culture of noblesse oblige can foster a more compassionate society. Keep exploring these ideas—it's vital to hold those in positions of power accountable for their impact.
~T. Jenna

I often hear that some celebrities and politicians donate an enormous supporting money to the weak.
>> I often hear that some celebrities and politicians donate enormous sums of money to support the less fortunate.
Since this activities are not legal duty, we don't have the right to criticize them if they don't do that.
>>Since these activities are not a legal duty, we don't have the right to criticize them if they don't do them.
However, it can be classified a type of moral duty to make good circle in society.
>>However, it can be classified as a type of moral duty to create a positive impact within society.
Their behaviors can make a positive impact to public through media.
>> Their behaviors can make a positive impact on the public through the media.
OR
>>
Their behaviors can contribute to the public in a beneficial manner through the media.
And also, their wealth is not only from the efforts but also sometimes from luck or inheritance.
Correct, or
>>And also, their wealth does not solely stem from their efforts; sometimes, it is also attributed to luck or inheritance.
Thus, they should make an action related to noblesse oblige.
Correct, or
>>Therefore, they ought to undertake an action aligned with the principle of noblesse oblige.
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