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When it's my first time working at a company, I don't know how to do it. However, I made good use of the documents and records that organized the work. Also, I talked to the person in charge on the phone and asked if I didn't know anything. The course that helps me with what I'm doing now is probably my major in social administration at university. Some of the things I'm doing are related to dministrative work

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Yes, I agree, Mia. ^^ We have to ask other people if there are things we don't know, especially when it is our first time working at a company. Well done! 
-Khai
When it's my first time working at a company, I don't know how to do it. 
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>> There are some tasks that I don't know how to do when it's my first time working at a company.
However, I made good use of the documents and records that organized the work. 
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>> However, I make use of the documents and records that organized the work.
Also, I talked to the person in charge on the phone and asked if I didn't know anything. 
>> CORRECT
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>> I ask the person in charge if there's something I don't know.
The course that helps me with what I'm doing now is probably my major in social administration at university. 
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>> My major in social administration helps me with my work.
ome of the things I'm doing are related to dministrative work
>> Some things I'm doing are related to administrative work.
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