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If you need a car but you don't have enough money to buy it, I advise you to buy a used car. Nowadays, there are many used cars and the websites which sell used cars. You can compare prices and qualities of the various used cars online. Actually my husband bought a used car and he has used it for about ten years without big problems.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework and giving advice based on the situation given. I totally agree. If you cannot buy a brand new one, you can buy a second-hand one at a cheaper price. But of course, you should have knowledge of what to check to make sure you buy a good one.
- T. Caitlyn
If you need a car but you don't have enough money to buy it, I advise you to buy a used car. 
>> CORRECT
Nowadays, there are many used cars and the websites which sell used cars. 
>> Nowadays, there are many used cars and websites that sell used cars.
You can compare prices and qualities of the various used cars online. 
>> You can compare prices and qualities of various used cars online.
Actually my husband bought a used car and he has used it for about ten years without big problems.
>> CORRECT
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