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Q. If you could eat only one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Why? Kindly answer in no more than five (5) sentences.

A. If I have to eat only one food forever, I will choose a Mcdonald hamburger set. Because it has essential nutrients. And also delicious.

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Good evening, June!^^

Fast food is widely available and simple to get.
Because it can be swiftly ordered and consumed, it is convenient for persons who are busy or on the go.
Fast food is meant to be tasty and visually appealing.

Thank you for this composition. I will talk to you again on Monday.
Have a good weekend!

Practice English whenever you can.^^

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If I have to eat only one food forever, I will choose a Mcdonald hamburger set.
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Because it has essential nutrients.
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And also delicious.
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