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I want to include running & balanced diet in my fitness program.
Aerobic exercise is important for stamina. One of the famous exercise for aerobic is running.
Balanced diet is also important for our health. Carbo, protein and fat must be balanced.

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Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
I want to include running & balanced diet in my fitness program.
>> Correct
Aerobic exercise is important for stamina.
>> Correct 
One of the famous exercise for aerobic is running.
>> Correct
Balanced diet is also important for our health.
>> Correct 
Carbo, protein and fat must be balanced.
>> Correct
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