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What are the most common accidents that occur in the kitchen?

작성자: 박*호
2024-03-28 788

회원님의 영작문

In the past, there were many fire accidents in the kitchen because fires were lit for cooking.
However, in recent years, most kitchen stoves have been made flameless.
We call it an induction stove.
So these days, instead of fires, the most common accidents that happen in the kitchen are breaking dishes or spilling water or food on the floor.
In particular, as men spend more and more time cooking, they often break dishes or spill food on the floor in unfamiliar kitchen environments.
When my family members (two daughters) criticize me for it, I say this.
“As the old saying goes, a daughter-in-law who does not wash the dishes cannot be forgiven, but a daughter-in-law who breaks a dish while washing dishes must be forgiven.”
The two daughters who heard my story agreed with me.
It is better to try something than to do nothing, and making mistakes in the process should be tolerated.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Thursday, Sun! 

The common types of kitchen accidents include cuts, burns, falls, fires, and electric shocks. Make sure to check everything in the kitchen before and while you're cooking. 

- Kristine ^^ 

In the past, there were many fire accidents in the kitchen because fires were lit for cooking.
>> In the past, there have been numerous kitchen fire incidents.
However, in recent years, most kitchen stoves have been made flameless.
>> However, the majority of kitchen stoves are now flameless 
We call it an induction stove.
>> Correct. 
Or >> It is known as an induction stove.
So these days, instead of fires, the most common accidents that happen in the kitchen are breaking dishes or spilling water or food on the floor.
>> Correct. 
In particular, as men spend more and more time cooking, they often break dishes or spill food on the floor in unfamiliar kitchen environments.
>> Correct. 
When my family members (two daughters) criticize me for it, I say this. “As the old saying goes, a daughter-in-law who does not wash the dishes cannot be forgiven, but a daughter-in-law who breaks a dish while washing dishes must be forgiven.”
>> Correct. 
The two daughters who heard my story agreed with me.
>> My two daughters agreed with me upon hearing my story.
It is better to try something than to do nothing, and making mistakes in the process should be tolerated.
>> Attempting something is better than doing nothing at all, and making errors along the way should be accepted.
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