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I had ever traveled for 15days so far.
I don¡¯t miss my home when I go abroad.
Because I am free from my house chores and other duty.
Home is my stable place.
Sometimes I think husband is one of the conditional of my happy life.

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Hello, Ms. Sunny!
They said that you won't miss home if you are with your family because YOUR FAMILY IS YOUR HOME. 
Take note that home is different from house. 
See you in class.
T. Aki~

I had ever traveled for 15days so far.
>>> I have traveled for 15 days so far.
>>> I had an experience of traveling for 15 days.
>>> I had an experience of being away from home for 15 days.

I don¡¯t miss my home when I go abroad.
>>> CORRECT!

Because I am free from my house chores and other duty.
>>> Because I am free from my house chores and other duties.

Home is my stable place.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Home is my comfort zone.

Sometimes I think husband is one of the conditional of my happy life.
>>> Sometimes I think husband is one of the conditional of my happy life.

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