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When I learn a foreign language, I shouldn't worry about my mistakes or errors because I believe the more tries which may lead to mistakes I do, the faster I understand how to speak the foreign language. I think making mistakes is a vital and natural part of the course of learning English. So no need to worry about mistakes. Unfortunately, we Koreans seem to be obsessed not to make any mistake during using English, which might have been formed in a class that focused on using correct English grammer. Such a obsession for perfect English may be the greatest barrier for Koreans to develop their English skills although they spent a lot of time and efforts to study English.

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Hey there, Steve. I appreciate how open-minded you are about the topic and I appreciate your honest opinion. Unfortunately, the perfectionist attitude of most English learners leads them to believe they aren't learning whenever they make mistakes. Thank you for keeping an open mind and for your humility as you keep learning English. Keep it up! I'll see you in the next class. ~Jane c", 


When I learn a foreign language, I shouldn't worry about my mistakes or errors because I believe the more tries which may lead to mistakes I do, the faster I understand how to speak the foreign language. 
>> When I learn a foreign language, I shouldn't worry about my mistakes or errors because I believe the more I try the more mistakes I make but the faster I understand how to speak the foreign language. 

I think making mistakes is a vital and natural part of the course of learning English. So no need to worry about mistakes. 
>> I think making mistakes is a vital and natural part of learning English so no need to worry about mistakes. 

Unfortunately, we Koreans seem to be obsessed not to make any mistake during using English, which might have been formed in a class that focused on using correct English grammar. 
>> Unfortunately, we Koreans seem to be obsessed with not making any mistakes while using English, which might have been formed in a class that focused on using correct English grammar. 

Such a obsession for perfect English may be the greatest barrier for Koreans to develop their English skills although they spent a lot of time and efforts to study English.
>> Such an obsession for perfect English may be the greatest barrier for Koreans in developing their English skills although they spend a lot of time and effort studying English.

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