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The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life.

But in my opinion, ti is not the problem carb itself.

I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems.

Carb is not a crime.

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The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life.
>>> A low-carb diet might be a good practice for a healthy life.

But in my opinion, it is not the problem carbs itself.
>>> CORRECT!

I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems.
>>> CORRECT!

Carb is not a crime.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Carb is not the culprit.

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