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Advising in English

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When giving advice in English, I feel like I command instead of advising. Because my English skills are not competitive, I can't express appropriately what I intend to advise.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework. Hopefully, as we continue and progress in our lessons, you will learn more ways to give advice in English and become more confident in the future when advising in this language.
- T. Caitlyn 
When giving advice in English, I feel like I command instead of advising. 
>> When giving advice in English, I feel like I'm commanding rather than advising.
Because my English skills are not competitive, I can't express appropriately what I intend to advise.
>> Because my English skills aren't advanced, I can't express exactly what I intend to advise
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