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1.My homeroom teacher cover all parts of history.
2.Some students want to abolish school uniform.
3.My school share school curriculum.
4.I said accurate answer about the question.
5.My parents pinpoint what is problem of me.

1. cover
2. abolish
3. curriculum
4. accurate
5. pinpoint

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Hello, Henry! It seems like you have a good understanding of these words. Good job! Just remember to study the correct structuring of your sentences.
~ Teacher Maxine

My homeroom teacher cover all parts of history.
>> My homeroom teacher covers all parts of history.

Some students want to abolish school uniform.
>> Some students want to abolish the school uniform.

My school share school curriculum.
>> My school shares the school curriculum.

I said accurate answer about the question.
>> I gave an accurate answer to the question.

My parents pinpoint what is problem of me.
>> My parents pinpoint what the problem is with me.
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