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What are the pros and cons of lending money to someone?

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2024-03-26 2071

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The first pros is that you could keep a relationship with someone given money. If you think it's quite important to someone in your life, you will need to keep the relationship. Second, you could check the trust with someone. For example, someone didn't pay money borrowed by you, you lost the trust with friends. So, I don't like lending money even my family. On the other hand, the cons. You could lose someone even if you've known someone for a long time. I believe no one knows what's going to happen in front of the amount of money. Last of all, you could burn the bridge with someone. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


The first pros is that you could keep a relationship with someone given money. 
>> The first pros is that you could keep a relationship with someone who borrowed money. 
If you think it's quite important to someone in your life, you will need to keep the relationship.
>> CORRECT!
Second, you could check the trust with someone. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Second, you could see if someone is trustworthy.
For example, someone didn't pay money borrowed by you, you lost the trust with friends. 
>> For example, someone didn't pay money borrowed from you, you lose your trust with friends. 
So, I don't like lending money even to my family. 
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, the cons. 
>> CORRECT!
You could lose someone even if you've known someone for a long time. 
>> CORRECT!
I believe no one knows what's going to happen in front of the amount of money. 
>> CORRECT!
Last of all, you could burn the bridge with someone. :)
>> CORRECT!

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