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Have a great day today:)

[Creative Writing] What springs to mind when you hear the word 'CHANGE'? Answer in 3-5 sentences.
i am springs the word 'challenge' when i heard the word ' change'.
because that mean is change something.
i think change something is very difficult. so i'm feels that is challenge.
for me, study english is also challenge and change too.

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Hello, Min Ji! ^^,)

Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework.

Change is not always a positive thing. It may encourage us to break bad behaviors and adopt healthy ones, but it may also be unpleasant, expensive, and even destructive.
What matters about change is how we anticipate and respond to it.

Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


i am springs the word 'challenge' when i heard the word ' change'.
>>> I thought of the word 'challenge' when I heard the word 'change'.

because that mean is change something.
>>> It's because of the idea of changing something.

i think change something is very difficult. so i'm feels that is challenge.
>>> I think changing something is very difficult, so I consider that a challenge.

for me, study english is also challenge and change too.
>>> For me, studying English is both a challenge and a change.

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