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Is it good to have foreign friends? Why?

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I don't know is it good to have foreign friends.
It's because I don't have any foreign friends but I think it will be little bit diffecult to talk wtih foreign friends.
It's because we use korean words but the foreign friend will use there country words so it will be little bit difficult to talk and if I want to talk with foreign friends I have to learn there country words.

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Hi Sunny!
This is a good start to the week.
Thank you so much for your effort.
I hope you will stay motivated until the end of this week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don't know is it good to have foreign friends.
>> I don't know if it is good to have foreign friends.
It's because I don't have any foreign friends but I think it will be little bit diffecult to talk wtih foreign friends.
>> It's because I don't have any foreign friends but I think it will be a little bit difficult to talk with them.
It's because we use korean words but the foreign friend will use there country words so it will be little bit difficult to talk and if I want to talk with foreign friends I have to learn there country words.
>> It's because we use Korean language but foreign friends will use the language in their country so it will be a little bit difficult to talk and if I want to talk with foreign friends, I have to learn their language.
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