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Do you easily trust strangers?

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Do you easily trust strangers?

I'm truly not!
Because I used to heard that I always keep the line and it's hard to truly close with me.
I know that why people told to me.
Because I don't have big interest in new people.
And if I can have the time with new people it just manners time for them, not my truly heart.
It can be look callous, but it's comfortable to me.

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Angela,
Life has become complicated. in the past, we easily trusted strangers because we thought all people were good, Contrary to now, we hardly discern true good people, but what can we do? It's now a norm in society not to trust strangers.
See you again!
T. Aki~

I'm truly not!
>>> CORRECT!

Because I used to heard that I always keep the line and it's hard to truly close with me.
>>>  Because I used to hear that I always keep the line and it's hard to truly close with me.

I know that why people told to me.
>>> I know that is why people told to me.

Because I don't have big interest in new people.
>>> Because I don't have a big interest in new people.

And if I can have the time with new people it just manners time for them, not my truly heart.
>>> And if I can have time with new people it is just manners time for them, not my true heart.

It can be look callous, but it's comfortable to me.
>>> It can look callous, but it's comfortable to me.
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