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What are some beautiful waterfall hikes that you would recommend to nature enthusiasts?

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As far as I know, there doesn't seem to be a travel course in Korea that involves walking a long distance to a waterfall.
Therefore, I would like to recommend the Jeju Olle Trail.
Jeju Island is one of the most popular tourist destinations in Korea and is famous for its nature-friendly Olle Trail.
Jeju Olle Trail is a trail for hikers.
¡®Olle¡¯ is a Korean dialect of Jeju Island that refers to a very narrow alley that leads from the street to the front door and back to the house.
This road, built since 2007, spans a total of 437km over 17 courses, and features many of Jeju Island's attractions, including the sea, oreum (a small mountain or hill), stone walls made of black basalt and tangerine fields with orange fruits.
In particular, if you walk along the 6th course located in the south of Jeju Island, you can come across Jeongbang Falls, where the waterfall falls directly into the sea.
I would like to strongly recommend walking the Jeju Olle Trail to nature enthusiasts.

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Goodmorning, Sun! 

Thank you for sharing you insights about this topic. See you tomorrow in class! 

- Kristine ^^ 

As far as I know, there doesn't seem to be a travel course in Korea that involves walking a long distance to a waterfall.
>> Correct. 
Therefore, I would like to recommend the Jeju Olle Trail.
>> Correct. 
Jeju Island is one of the most popular tourist destinations in Korea and is famous for its nature-friendly Olle Trail.
>> Correct. 
Or >> One of the most popular tourist destinations in Korea is Jeju Island, and it's well-known for its environmentally friendly Olle Trail.
Jeju Olle Trail is a trail for hikers.
>> Correct. 
Or >> People can hike on the Jeju Olle Trail.
¡®Olle¡¯ is a Korean dialect of Jeju Island that refers to a very narrow alley that leads from the street to the front door and back to the house.
>> Correct. 
This road, built since 2007, spans a total of 437km over 17 courses, and features many of Jeju Island's attractions, including the sea, oreum (a small mountain or hill), stone walls made of black basalt and tangerine fields with orange fruits.
>> Correct. 
In particular, if you walk along the 6th course located in the south of Jeju Island, you can come across Jeongbang Falls, where the waterfall falls directly into the sea.
>> Correct. 
Or >> It is particularly possible to find Jeongbang Falls, where a waterfall plunges straight into the sea, by strolling along the 6th course that runs down the southern part of Jeju Island.
I would like to strongly recommend walking the Jeju Olle Trail to nature enthusiasts.
>> Correct. 

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