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I think if have a child. Their family is able to happy. And they can more time. They can save moey even childrens. Child can have more happy.

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Hi, Rick! I agree that a child can make a family happy. It is important that the parents are ready and prepare before they decide to have children, so they can provide for their children well. Thank you for your response. See you again!
--Teacher Anji

I think if have a child. Their family is able to happy. And they can more time. They can save moey even childrens. Child can have more happy.
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