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Have you ever been stung by a jellyfish or a sea urchin?

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It is said that if persons are stung by a jellyfish or sea urchin while swimming in the sea, they will experience pain or swelling, and in severe cases, their bodies may become paralyzed or even be life-threatening.
Fortunately, I have never been stung by a jellyfish or sea urchin.
These days, I eat sea urchin roe as a side dish when drinking alcohol.
Now I mainly swim at the indoor swimming pool in my neighborhood, so I don't encounter jellyfish or sea urchins.
The southwestern sea of ​​Korea, where I used to swim when I was young, was not a habitat for jellyfish or sea urchins.
However, when I was young, I mostly swam in reservoirs, and I occasionally got bitten by leeches there.
Leeches are disgusting, and once bitten, the bleeding doesn't stop and it hurts, so they were the thing that bothered me the most when swimming in the reservoir.

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Happy weekend, Sun! 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts regarding this topic. See you next week! 

- Kristine ^^ 

It is said that if persons are stung by a jellyfish or sea urchin while swimming in the sea, they will experience pain or swelling, and in severe cases, their bodies may become paralyzed or even be life-threatening.
>> It is said that if people are stung by a jellyfish or sea urchin while swimming in the sea, they will experience pain or swelling, and in severe cases, their bodies may become paralyzed or even be life-threatening.
Fortunately, I have never been stung by a jellyfish or sea urchin.
>> Correct. 
These days, I eat sea urchin roe as a side dish when drinking alcohol.
>> Correct. 
Now I mainly swim at the indoor swimming pool in my neighborhood, so I don't encounter jellyfish or sea urchins.
>> I don't encounter jellyfish or sea urchins because I usually swim in an indoor swimming pool in my neighborhood. 
The southwestern sea of ​​Korea, where I used to swim when I was young, was not a habitat for jellyfish or sea urchins.
>> There's also no jellyfish or sea urchins in my hometown. 
However, when I was young, I mostly swam in reservoirs, and I occasionally got bitten by leeches there.
>> When I was young, I mostly swam in reservoirs and occasionally got bitten by leeches. 
Leeches are disgusting, and once bitten, the bleeding doesn't stop and it hurts, so they were the thing that bothered me the most when swimming in the reservoir.
>> The thing that disturbed me the most while swimming in the reservoir was leeches since they are disgusting and, once bitten, the bleeding never stops and it hurts.
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