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I love forests that give me a different sense of beauty from season to season. In spring, when the buds sprout, young yellow-green leaves can be observed, in summer, the leaves are fully ripe with green leaves, and in autumn, the leaves that turn yellow and red are finely colored, and in winter, the forest in winter also feels as if each of the bare branches is holding out. The scenery of white snow flowers on the branches is also wonderful. I love the forests that show their own beauty. I'm so grateful that such a forest is nearby that I can take a walk at any time.

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Thank you for sharing your favorite place, Mia. ^^ You have given a very good description of it. Well done!
-Khai

I love forests that give me a different sense of beauty from season to season. 

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>> I love forests, as they give me a different sense of beauty from season to season. 

In spring, when the buds sprout, young yellow-green leaves can be observed, in summer, the leaves are fully ripe with green leaves, and in autumn, the leaves that turn yellow and red are finely colored, and in winter, the forest in winter also feels as if each of the bare branches is holding out. 

>> In spring, when the buds sprout, young yellow-green leaves can be observed. In summer, the leaves are fully ripe with green leaves. In autumn, the leaves that turn yellow and red are finely colored. And in winter, the forest also feels as if each of the bare branches is holding out.

The scenery of white snow flowers on the branches is also wonderful. 

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>> The way the snow flowers look is also wonderful.

I love the forests that show their own beauty. 

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>> I admire the forests that reveal their own beauty.

I'm so grateful that such a forest is nearby that I can take a walk at any time.

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>> I¡¯m so thankful that there is a forest near my house and I can walk there at any time.


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