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What could be some reasons why there are people who betray their friends?

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Of course, they want to get a good thing or become a good person. I'm sure the main reason is money. People try to betray their friends for money. And, when it comes to money, it seems like there is no such thing as family or friends. You can see a person's true colors in front of lots of money. On top of that, that's why I don't like my dad's side. They're looking for too much money. And they don't like to take a risk although I take it.

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Of course, they want to get a good thing or become a good person. 
>> CORRECT!
I'm sure the main reason is money. 
>> CORRECT!
People try to betray their friends for money. 
>> CORRECT!
And, when it comes to money, it seems like there is no such thing as family or friends. 
>> CORRECT!
You can see a person's true colors in front of lots of money. 
>> CORRECT!
On top of that, that's why I don't like my dad's side. 
>> CORRECT!
They're looking for too much money. 
>> CORRECT!
And they don't like to take a risk although I take it.
>> CORRECT!
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