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Describe a friend who has played an important part in your life.

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When I saw this topic, I was thinking straight one of my friend. Actually, she's not my best friend but I have a close relationship with her. she let me know meaning of 'friend' and 'friendship'. We haven't argued until now becuase we try to respect each other in every situation. We met first time in elementary school when we were 11 years old in international age. I think it's bless that I could meet her for changing schools. I'm sure that she have good personality I've met. Also, she have an abilty that can feel comfortable the other people who are beside of her. Furthermore, we have similar hobby and personality, it leads to feel happy and enjoy. Unfortunality, we attend another school now, but it doesn't matter to keep relationship with her because we have conviction of strong friendship.

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Hey Sarah! Thank you for sharing about your friend who has played an important role in your life. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka ^^


When I saw this topic, I was thinking straight one of my friend. 
>> When I saw this topic, I immediately thought of one of my friends.

Actually, she's not my best friend but I have a close relationship with her. 
>> Although she's not my best friend, we have a close relationship. 

she let me know meaning of 'friend' and 'friendship'. 
>> She helped me understand the meaning of 'friend' and 'friendship'. 

We haven't argued until now becuase we try to respect each other in every situation. 
>> We haven't argued until now because we always try to respect each other in every situation. 

We met first time in elementary school when we were 11 years old in international age. 
>> We first met in elementary school when we were 11 years old by international age standards. 

I think it's bless that I could meet her for changing schools. 
>> I consider it a blessing that I could meet her when changing schools. 

I'm sure that she have good personality I've met. 
>> I'm certain that she has a good personality based on what I've experienced. 

Also, she have an abilty that can feel comfortable the other people who are beside of her. 
>> Additionally, she has an ability to make others feel comfortable around her. 

Furthermore, we have similar hobby and personality, it leads to feel happy and enjoy. 
>> Furthermore, we share similar hobbies and personalities, which contributes to our happiness and enjoyment. 

Unfortunality, we attend another school now, but it doesn't matter to keep relationship with her because we have conviction of strong friendship.
>> Unfortunately, we now attend different schools, but it doesn't matter because we are convinced of our strong friendship and will maintain it.
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