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In what ways can we take good care of our teeth?

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We have many ways for take care of our teeth.
First, we always brush our teeth.
That's important and good thing.
Second, we can chek the our teeth many times.
These are the ways of the take care of our teeth.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


We have many ways for take care of our teeth.
>> We have many ways to take care of our teeth.
OR >> We have many ways for taking care of our teeth.
First, we always brush our teeth.
>> First, we should always brush our teeth.
That's an important and good thing.
>> CORRECT!
Second, we can chek the our teeth many times.
>> Second, we should have our teeth checked regularly.
These are the ways of the take care of our teeth.
>> These are the ways of taking  care of our teeth.
OR >> These are the ways to take care of our teeth.
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