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Vietnamese character is bright and negative.
Especially young people always were smiling when they were walking at the street.
Although they were running hardly.
They are not fast but nobody get angry.
They might be patient a lot.

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Hi Ms. Sunny!
People have different characteristics because of their culture. Just like what you mentioned, it is a norm in Vietnam that they just cross the street even motorcycles are coming everywhere. It's nice to learn about different cultures!
T. Aki~

Vietnamese character is bright and negative.
>>> Vietnamese character is bright and negative.
>>> Vietnamese people are bright and negative.

Especially young people always were smiling when they were walking at the street.
>>>  Especially young people always smile when they are walking in the street.

Although they were running hardly.
>>> Although they were running persistently.

They are not fast but nobody get angry.
>>> They are not fast but nobody gets angry.

They might be patient a lot.
>>> Thye might be full of pationece.
>>> They might have a lot of patience.

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