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There are necessary factors for perfect day. Delicious food, good people, health, relaxed mind. So perfect Monday would look like this. I will wake up with good body condition then I will eat delicious breakfast. Maybe waking up early would be good because it makes me happy and there are many things to do for perfect day. Then I will do my task not to worry about tomorrow. Eating delicious lunch and hanging out with good friends will be good. Then I will do my task again and then come back home with light mind. Then I will relax alone doing my phone, waching movies, reading some books or doing some crafts.

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Hello Seong Eun,

I just wanted to drop you a quick note to say thank you for completing your homework so diligently. Your effort really shows, and I appreciate the hard work you put into it. Keep up the fantastic work! Remember, every step you take brings you closer to your goals. If you ever need any help or have any questions, don't hesitate to reach out. You're doing great!

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There are necessary factors for perfect day. Delicious food, good people, health, relaxed mind.

>> There are necessary factors for a perfect day: delicious food, good people, health, and a relaxed mind.

So perfect Monday would look like this.

>> So, a perfect Monday would look like this:

 I will wake up with good body condition then I will eat delicious breakfast.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I will wake up in good physical condition, and then I will eat a delicious breakfast.

Maybe waking up early would be good because it makes me happy and there are many things to do for perfect day.

>> Maybe waking up early would be good because it makes me happy, and there are many things to do for a perfect day.

Then I will do my task not to worry about tomorrow.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Then, I will do my tasks without worrying about tomorrow.

Eating delicious lunch and hanging out with good friends will be good.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Eating delicious lunch and hanging out with good friends will be enjoyable.

Then I will do my task again and then come back home with light mind.

>> Afterward, I will complete my tasks again and then come back home with a light mind.

Then I will relax alone doing my phone, waching movies, reading some books or doing some crafts.

>>Finally, I will relax alone by using my phone, watching movies, reading some books, or doing some crafts.

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