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Why do you think some people don\'t report being scammed?

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Of course, they don't think the police can catch them as me. And, they aren't sure whether they can compensate it or not. Even if the police caught them, it would be hard to make it up. However, I think people will report it if a mount of money is too much. Before I got scammed, I had thought people who were scammed were stupid. After doing it, I was dumbfound. By the way, I'm studying with the frog princess now while I'm writing my homework. I can't stay focus because my heart is racing. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Of course, they don't think the police can catch them as me. 
>> CORRECT!
And, they aren't sure whether they can compensate it or not. 
>> CORRECT!
Even if the police caught them, it would be hard to make it up. 
>> Even if the police catches them, it would be hard to make it up. 
However, I think people will report it if a mount of money is too much. 
>> However, I think people will report it if the amount of money is too much. 
OR >> However, I think people will report it if it's a large sum of money
Before I got scammed, I had thought people who were scammed were stupid. 
>> CORRECT!
After doing it, I was dumbfound. 
>> After doing it, I was dumbfounded
By the way, I'm studying with the frog princess now while I'm writing my homework. 
>> CORRECT!
I can't stay focused because my heart is racing. :)
>> CORRECT!

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