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서비스 입니다.

I had so much fun last week.

작성자: 윤*혜
2024-03-18 912

회원님의 영작문

Last weekend Sunday, I met my high school friends and ate, took pictures, sang songs, and watched movies and drank alcohol.
Of course, I only drank water.
Actually, I wanted to drink, but my friends told me not to drink, so I didn't.
Anyway, it's been a while since we got together and talked happily, but time went by very quickly.
One friend is a teacher at a painting academy, the other one is preparing for graduate school at a famous university in Korea, and the other one is making money hard.
I used to be the busiest, but now my friends are busier than me, so I feel a little bad.
It may be because I think that I have very good friends, but I think I am the only one who is in the same place between the past times that my friends are listening to their solid ideologies and plans for the future.
They're all very good kids.
I was so happy that everyone came near my house because my feet hurt.
Anyway, last weekend was a very good weekend.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Da Hye, 

It sounds like you had a wonderful time with your high school friends last weekend! Spending quality time together, reminiscing, and catching up on each other's lives must have been truly special. It's heartwarming to hear about the bond you share with your friends, despite everyone's busy schedules. Keep cherishing these moments and the valuable friendships you have. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Last weekend Sunday, I met my high school friends and ate, took pictures, sang songs, and watched movies and drank alcohol. 

>>Last weekend Sunday, I met my high school friends and ate, took pictures, sang songs, watched movies, and drank alcohol. 

Of course, I only drank water. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Of course, I only had water. 

Actually, I wanted to drink, but my friends told me not to drink, so I didn't. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Actually, I was tempted to drink, but my friends advised me against it, so I refrained. 

Anyway, it's been a while since we got together and talked happily, but time went by very quickly. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>It's been a while since we gathered and enjoyed each other's company, and before we knew it, time flew by. 

One friend is a teacher at a painting academy, the other one is preparing for graduate school at a famous university in Korea, and the other one is making money hard. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>One friend is a teacher at a painting academy, the other one is preparing for graduate school at a famous university in Korea, and the other one is making money hard. 

I used to be the busiest, but now my friends are busier than me, so I feel a little bad. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I used to be the busiest among my friends, but now they seem busier than me, which makes me feel a little down. 

It may be because I think that I have very good friends, but I think I am the only one who is in the same place between the past times that my friends are listening to their solid ideologies and plans for the future. 

>>It may be because I consider myself to have very good friends, but I feel like I'm the only one who hasn't moved forward when I see my friends discussing their firm beliefs and future plans. 

They're all very good kids. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>They are all very nice. 

I was so happy that everyone came near my house because my feet hurt. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I was happy that everyone came to my house, especially since my feet hurt. 

Anyway, last weekend was a very good weekend. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Anyway, last weekend was fantastic. 

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