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It's a profound question. I don't know if my answer to the question is correct It is good to focus on and remember the movie, but I think the moment you watch the movie should be fun. To remember and enjoy the movie, I sit in a comfortable chair and watch the movie. Then, my body and mind are at ease. Also, if you turn off your cell phone and focus on the movie as much as possible, you can nderstand the contents of the movie.

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Well done, Mia. ^^ And yes, you have answered the question correctly. ^^ I agree that as much as possible, it is better not to use our phones when watching movies.
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It's a profound question. 

>> CORRECT

I don't know if my answer to the question is correct 

>> I don't know if my answer to the question is correct.

It is good to focus on and remember the movie, but I think the moment you watch the movie should be fun. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> It is good if we focus and remember what happened in the movie, but I think that you should enjoy it.

To remember and enjoy the movie, I sit in a comfortable chair and watch the movie. 

>> CORRECT

OR 

>> I enjoy watching movies while sitting in a comfortable chair.

Then, my body and mind are at ease. 

>> CORRECT

OR 

>>With that, my body and mind are relaxed.

Also, if you turn off your cell phone and focus on the movie as much as possible, you can nderstand the contents of the movie.

>> Also, if you turn off your cell phone and focus on the movie as much as possible, you can understand the contents of the movie.


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