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Hello.
Happy Sunday.
Although I am working at the clinic now, I feel so happy.
There was a meeting with MJ yesterday.
Since MJ was afraid of me, he asked our friend who is the boss of a medical device company to join the meeting and mediate our contract for seperation.
Of course, he is one of my best friends.
MJ's brain seems to be injured, I guess.
He sent around 2.5thousands dollars to my friend's account.
What did it mean?
MJ seems to think other person as a kind of person like him.
Anyway, my friend tried to mediate the differences of opinions about contract between MJ and me.
MJ suggested that we will eat a lunch again eveyday, but I refused it because I knew his bad intention obviously.
Before this conversation, he wanted to stay at the end of this year, however, he changed his mind according to my reply.
Maybe he will leave the clinic soon; this June at the most.
After the meeting, my friend and I met another friend.
We ate a delicious dinner.
That was excellent.
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Dr. Kim!

It was a happy Sunday and weekend indeed! I worked and enjoyed the time with colleagues in the events' industry. Nevertheless, you also had a blast with the turn of the events with Dr. MJ.

Since you are so systematic and organized, Dr. MJ's world is slowly shrinking like he has never seen it before as you corner him with a prepared contract as well as with your firm decisions. It is very lame to send money to bribe your friend because relationships priceless. It is too unfortunate that Dr. MJ thinks that all people has a price on their heads. I wonder how much price he values himself...

The world is so simple-if you did evil, it will come back to you, and if you did good, it also comes back as the Law of Karma. If he leaves soon, he deserves it. We all deserve everything happening to us, good or bad.

Respect, value, and keep your good friends and always be a good one to them and they will save you in the future. 

Thank you for sharing these weekend events you had at work. There is a word spelling as well as some grammatical suggestions I have made. Study them carefully.

See you tomorrow. Great job!

-T. Donna~

Hello.

>> Correct!

Happy Sunday.
>> Correct!

Although I am working at the clinic now, I feel so happy.
>> Correct!

There was a meeting with MJ yesterday.
>> Correct!

Since MJ was afraid of me, he asked our friend who is the boss of a medical device company to join the meeting and mediate our contract for seperation.
>> Correct!
Or: separation

Of course, he is one of my best friends.
>> Correct!

MJ's brain seems to be injured, I guess.
>> Correct!

He sent around 2.5thousands dollars to my friend's account.
>> Correct!

What did it mean?
>> Correct!

MJ seems to think other person as a kind of person like him.
>>  MJ seems to think that other persons as kind of person like him.

Anyway, my friend tried to mediate the differences of opinions about contract between MJ and me.
>> Correct!

MJ suggested that we will eat a lunch again eveyday, but I refused it because I knew his bad intention obviously.
>> MJ suggested that we will eat lunch again everyday, but I refused it because I knew his bad intention obviously.

Before this conversation, he wanted to stay at the end of this year, however, he changed his mind according to my reply.
>> Correct!
 
Maybe he will leave the clinic soon; this June at the most.
>> Correct!

After the meeting, my friend and I met another friend.
>> Correct!

We ate a delicious dinner.
>> Correct!

That was excellent.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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