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Peaple should emulate that celebrities practice or working hard but people have to know what is bad from bad news about the celebrities.
The celebrities can do drug or illegal game or bad behavior. Peaple have to know this is bad and they have to know who is criminal or bad.

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Good point, Henry!
While it's important to recognize celebrities for their hard work and dedication, it's also crucial to be aware of the negative aspects that may arise, such as illegal activities or bad behavior.
~ Teacher Maxine

Peaple should emulate that celebrities practice or working hard but people have to know what is bad from bad news about the celebrities.
>> People should emulate celebrities who practice working hard, but they also need to discern what is bad from the negative news about celebrities.

The celebrities can do drug or illegal game or bad behavior. 
>> Celebrities can engage in drug use, illegal activities, or exhibit bad behavior.

Peaple have to know this is bad and they have to know who is criminal or bad.
>> People need to understand that these behaviors are bad, and they should be able to distinguish who is involved in criminal or unacceptable activities.

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