¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÃÖ*Ç
2024-03-15 553

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some common superstitions about good luck and bad luck in your country?

There are many funny superstitions in Korea.
General people believe it lightly.
But, sometimes who believe in Korea shamanism are too much believe.
Anyway, I'll introduce Korea superstitions about good luck and misfortune.
Common good luck mean is that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.
That's why, some Asia countries, pigs has symbol of good luck.
And case of in my country, the pronunciation of the Korean style Chinese word for pig is "DON".
This pronunciation is the same Korean word for money, so pigs are also symbol of fortune in Korea.
Next, there are many superstitions that mean has bad luck.
For example, we shouldn't eat seaweed soup when we prepare for an exam.
The reason is the seaweed is a slippery food, so student fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat.
But my mom gave me seaweed soup to me before an exam day.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some common superstitions about good luck and bad luck in your country?


There are many funny superstitions in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
General people believe it lightly.
>> Generally, people believe in it lightly.
But, sometimes who believe in Korea shamanism are too much believe.
>> But sometimes, Koreans  who believe in shamanism tend to do it too much.
Anyway, I'll introduce Korean superstitions about good luck and misfortune.
>> CORRECT!
Common good luck mean is that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.
>> Common good luck means that if a pig comes in our dream, we will win the lottery.
That's why, some Asia countries, pigs has symbol of good luck.
>> That's why, in some Asian countries, pigs are a symbol of good luck.
And case of in my country, the pronunciation of the Korean style Chinese word for pig is "DON".
>> And in the case of my country, the pronunciation of the Chinese word for pig is "DON" (in Korean).
This pronunciation is the same Korean word for money, so pigs are also symbol of fortune in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
Next, there are many superstitions that mean has bad luck.
>> Next, there are many superstitions that means bad luck.
For example, we shouldn't eat seaweed soup when we prepare for an exam.
>> CORRECT!
The reason is the seaweed is a slippery food, so student fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat.
>> The reason is that the seaweed is a slippery food, so students fail because they slip and fail on the exam if they eat it.
But my mom gave me seaweed soup to me before an exam day.
>> But my mom gave me seaweed soup before the exam day.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
134448 Homework ³ª*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 2
134447 homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 277
134446 homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 680
134445 Proposal ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 2
134444 homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 394
134443 1/25 homework ³ë*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 1
134442 To Be 20 Years Old ¹Ú*À² ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 475
134441 What does ¡°financial responsibility¡± mean? Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 337
134440 Buying a car ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 2
134439 Appearance ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-04 1
134438 5 DAY HOMEWORK ÀÌ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-02-03 513
134437 How is beauty defined in your culture? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2024-02-03 1
134436 What is the most interesting place you have visited during the... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2024-02-03 374
134435 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 0
134434 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 541
134433 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 1
134432 What are you monst excited for about the future? why? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 403
134431 How was joining the traditional musical instrument club... À±*ºó ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 369
134430 Homework ±è*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 395
134429 homework 02.02 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-02-02 391

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04