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I like the word \'friendship\'.

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I don't think friendship is important in life.
I think friendship is a way to make like-minded friends among people, to endure society better, and to make them feel less lonely.
Loneliness is like a bug that eats me.
In order to prevent it, it seems to create human relationships with words that have many good effects, such as love, friendship, and family.
Sometimes there are people who want to continue friendship even if it's hard for me in that situation, but I think a hard relationship is never a good friendship.

But I like the word 'friendship'.
So I always try to be careful not to shackle friendship to someone and me.

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Hi Da Hye, 

Your reflection on friendship resonates deeply. It's wonderful how you perceive friendship as more than just a social connection but rather a remedy for loneliness and a source of support in navigating life's challenges. Your commitment to nurturing genuine friendships while avoiding unhealthy dynamics is commendable. Keep cherishing the beauty of friendship while maintaining healthy boundaries! 

~Teacher Cathy  

 

I don't think friendship is important in life. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>In my opinion, friendship is not necessary in life. 

I think friendship is a way to make like-minded friends among people, to endure society better, and to make them feel less lonely. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I believe friendship serves as a means to connect with like-minded individuals, navigate society more easily, and alleviate feelings of loneliness. 

Loneliness is like a bug that eats me. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Loneliness feels like a bug that consumes me 

In order to prevent it, it seems to create human relationships with words that have many good effects, such as love, friendship, and family. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>To prevent it, it appears essential to cultivate human connections through positive concepts like love, friendship, and family, which have numerous beneficial effects. 

Sometimes there are people who want to continue friendship even if it's hard for me in that situation, but I think a hard relationship is never a good friendship. 

>>CORRECT

OR>>Sometimes, there are people who wish to maintain a friendship even when it becomes challenging for me. However, I believe that a difficult relationship is never a true friendship. 

But I like the word 'friendship'. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>But I have a fondness for the term 'friendship'. 

So I always try to be careful not to shackle friendship to someone and me. 

>>So I always try to be careful not to confine friendship between someone and myself. 

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