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Q:Do you like receiving letters? Why or why not?
A: If it's just sometimes, it won't matter but if it's too much, then it won't be good.
For me, I only receive letters in occasions so it doesn't really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things, so if there's too much letters to read, then I wouldn't feel that good.
But usually I just like receiving letters.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework. Enjoy your weekend!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to consider:

1. If it's just sometimes, it won't matter but if it's too much, then it won't be good.
>>If it's just sometimes, then it won't matter that much but if it's too much, then it won't be good.

2. For me, I only receive letters in occasions so it doesn't really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things, so if there's too much letters to read, then I wouldn't feel that good.
>>I only receive letters during occasions, so it doesn't really matter for now, but I actually easily get bored in reading things. So, if there are too many letters to read, then I won't feel that good.

3. But usually I just like receiving letters.
>>But usually, I like receiving letters.

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