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The best movie I've ever seen is "Star is Born". My daughter recommended it, so I watched it on Netflix. The music of this movie is really cool. There are a lot of songs in the movie, and they were all sung live by Lady Gaga and Bredley Cooper, who are the main characters. Bradley Cooper's performance was very impressive. He showed a realistic performance from his miserable state of being addicted to alcohol and drugs. Lady Gaga was also amazingly perfect in both singing and acting. I cried a lot when Lady Gaga sang the ending song.

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Wow, you have written a good answer, Mia! ^^ I also cry when I watch these types of movies. Job well done! ^^
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The best movie I've ever seen is "Star is Born".

>> The best movie I've ever seen was "Star is Born".

My daughter recommended it, so I watched it on Netflix.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> My daughter told me to check out this movie, so I watched it on Netflix.

The music of this movie is really cool.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> The songs in the movie were really cool.

There are a lot of songs in the movie, and they were all sung live by Lady Gaga and Bredley Cooper, who are the main characters.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> The songs were sung by main characters portrayed by Lady Gaga and Bradley Cooper.

Bradley Cooper's performance was very impressive. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Bradley Cooper's performance was very commendable.

He showed a realistic performance from his miserable state of being addicted to alcohol and drugs. 

>> He acted well and he was in the character of being addicted to alcohol and drugs.

Lady Gaga was also amazingly perfect in both singing and acting. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Lady Gaga portrayed her role perfectly as she was good at singing and acting.

I cried a lot when Lady Gaga sang the ending song.

>> I was in tears during the ending scene when Lady Gaga sang.


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