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Do you think it\'s important for businesses to follow ethical practices? Why?

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Holly, it's a tough question. Companies usually operate to make lots of profit, regardless of whether there are moral ethics involved. However, I think most companies ignore it. Just only part of companies is reported in the media. And then, the way in Korea is for similar companies to investigate. For example, you work at accounting department. Then, you realize there are a lot of black money. I want to hear about your answer. Are you going to be silent or not? You are going to tell me later. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Holly, it's a tough question. 
>> CORRECT!
Companies usually operate to make lots of profit, regardless of whether there are moral ethics involved. 
>> CORRECT!
However, I think most companies ignore it. 
>> CORRECT!
Just only part of companies is reported in the media. 
>> Just only a part of companies is reported in the media. 
And then, the way in Korea is for similar companies to investigate. 
>> CORRECT!
For example, you work at accounting department. 
>> For example, you work in the accounting department. 
Then, you realize there are a lot of black money. 
>> CORRECT!
I want to hear about your answer. 
>> CORRECT!
Are you going to be silent or not? You are going to tell me later. :)
>> CORRECT!
[ I WILL. Definitely! :) ~ T. Camille ]
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